31 Ghosts – The Draft

Turns out, this weekend marks the last wedding I’m working in October! Doesn’t mean October is going to be much less crazy with two business trips on tap starting on Monday. And I just finished my day job and then the rehearsal dinner for the aforementioned wedding – I’m tired. So, tonight and tomorrow will be necessarily short. Speaking of needing to finish a story…

I really don’t know what’s going on with my writer’s nook. This is the writing space I helped Jake insulate to keep me warm while writing yet still look out the back window into the garden in the summer or the back yard covered in snow in the winter. All while being cozy and productive.

And it’s been great – this is where I wrote the first two books of my trilogy – The Veilbound Saga. A Crown of Thorns and Moonlight was written in the dead of winter in a manic writing sprint. The second book, A Heart of Shadows and Fire, was written during the sweltering summer of 2023 – but between the insulation and a killer HVAC unit, my writing nook was my comfortable cocoon.

So, you can understand my confusion since I started A Throne of Stars and Sorrow, I’ve felt a distinct cold draft on the back of my neck. It’s been a beautifully lovely spring – warm, but not hot – so it’s not the outside weather. I made Jake check the ducting from the AC unit, and he wasn’t able to find anything. The only windows in the room are in front of me, so the draft isn’t coming from there.

The cold air on my neck has literally driven me to distraction, making frequent hot tea breaks absolutely necessary. As such, the writing has proceeded at a much slower pace than I’d like.

I was working on a pivotal chapter where Eryndis – who’s been loyal to the forgotten queen since book one – reveals his own god-touched agenda when the draft came in puffs, almost like breaths. I shivered, and started to turn when I felt a hand grip my shoulder. The draft turned into actual icy breaths as a fervent whisper came right next to my ear – “Will you please finish this chapter first–!”

31 Ghosts – The Long Listing

“I know it’s in my price range, Darrell, I’m just concerned that if it’s been sitting on the market that long, something has got to be wrong with it,” Jason said into his AirPods as he steered towards the freeway.

“And you’re right to be concerned, Jason. This place is what we call a ‘stigmatized property.’”

“A what?”

“Stigmatized property – basically, something bad happened there and we have to disclose it and that usually gets people running for the hills.”

Jason rolled his eyes as he merged his Tesla into traffic. “And you think this is making me want to see the place more?” He scoffed, then a moment later asked, “So… what happened that this place has been sitting on the market for… what did you say? Eight months?”

“Eighteen months. And it was, you know… just a little…mbmbmbm…” he whisper-mumbled the last few words.

“Darrell? Just a little what?”

“Just a little… familicide.”

“Come again?”

“The whole family was killed in the house.”

Jason was quiet a long time.

“Jason? Are you there?”

“Goodbye, Darrell,” Jason reached for the “End Call” button but heard Darrell’s pleading voice.

“Wait, wait, wait! Jason!”

“Yes?”

“Look, the whole killing thing happened a number of years ago. The property was tied up in red tape for a few years and then it came on the market, like I said, eighteen months ago. It’s been a really long listing. The story scares people off. But I’m telling you, at least give the place a look. I can hear you’re on your way home – where are you?”

Jason shook his head, surprised he was even entertaining Darrell on this. “I’m on the 735.”

“Okay, look, swing by and take a look – it’s not that much of a detour. I’ll text you the address and the lockbox code. All I’m asking is a look, okay?”

Jason thought about it for long moments and then sighed, “Fine. Text me the details,” and he disconnected the call. A bell sound from his phone signaled the message, and soon Jason was detouring for the outskirts of town.

He turned up the narrow winding drive and found the address marking the driveway entrance. Following the overgrown hedges he soon found himself in front of a two-story Spanish style house with a beautiful terra cotta tile roof. The place had to have been built a hundred years ago… He reached for his phone to check with Darrell, but immediately noticed he was far enough out of town to have absolutely no signal.

“This keeps getting better and better,” he shook his head and got out of the car.

While the place looked like it needed a new coat of paint and some serious landscaping, from the outside Jason thought it looked reasonably kept up – all the windows seemed intact, no graffiti… He’d heard the horror stories of squatters or people scavenging copper wire and gutting a place – hell, he’d toured a few of those already. So, the dingy-but-intact nature of the place intrigued him as he stepped up the flagstone steps. The windows were filthy but it was pitch black in the house, so he didn’t expect he’d be able to see much anyway. He reached the arched front door and fiddled with the lockbox on the door handle, entering the code Darrell had texted him. Extracting the key, he unlocked the door just as he heard a coyote yipping way too nearby for comfort. He hurriedly opened the door, stepped inside and closed the door behind him.

The first thing that hit him was the smell – no, not smell, aroma. It was a mix of fresh baked bread and roasting chicken, and it made his stomach growl in a purely instinctive way. He quickly realized that lights were on. He turned away from the closed front door and saw the interior lit with warm lights and wondered if some other real estate agent had forgotten to turn off the lights… but then he remembered the dark windows.

He heard a noise from upstairs – a woman’s voice, muffled but the sternness of her tone came through… a child’s muffled protest… and then silence…and stillness. He stood fixed to the spot, straining to hear another sound and was startled when he heard a door open upstairs and a woman emerged into the hallway, closing the door behind her. She cast her gaze down to the front door and smiled broadly, “Honey, you’re home!”

Jason stared up at the woman who looked to be in her mid-thirties, her curly blonde hair down to her shoulders, a kitchen apron tied around her waist.

Before Jason could react, she continued, “I just put the kids down. They made a terrible, terrible mess. They’re on a long timeout!” a deep furrow crossed her brow, but it disappeared as quickly as it had come and her face became angelic as she came down the stairs. “Dinner is just about ready. Come sit down, I made you a drink.”

Jason watched the woman descend the stairs and cross in front of him towards what he assumed was the dining room? She smelled of a floral perfume with something of a metallic tint to it…. He was struck at once by her scent – that she had a scent. When she first emerged, he wondered if she was a ghost, but he’d never heard of ghosts smelling so good. He had no idea who she was, but he followed her into the dining room where two place settings were laid out, a crystal rocks glass with brown liquor and an orange peel in it sat in front of an empty plate.

“Have a seat, honey.” She gestured to the chair with a broad smile. “Oh, it’s your usual old fashioned,” she answered an unasked question. Curious what was going on, Jason took the proffered seat.

“Perfect,” she said. Her smile twisted from the picture of domestic bliss to something vulpine in a second, her voice turning ice cold as she said, “I’m so glad you’re home.”

Jason’s eyes widened and he felt his blood turn to ice just as the lights went out.

And that’s when the screaming started.

31 Ghosts – Low Chapel Studios

“Thanks for joining me tonight on a very special episode of ‘Tracking the Sound’. I’m your host and music obsessive, Reed Danner, and I’m so excited to bring you into this studio. This is honestly the place I had in mind when I started this series, and it’s taken this long to get the stars to align and… I’m getting ahead of myself. Welcome to the legendary Low Chapel Studios.”

The camera pans off of Reed onto a relatively non-descript tilt-up beige office building. The only overt indication the building housed anything other than some anonymous tech company was the enormous hand-painted sign over the front entrance announcing, “Low Chapel Studios” and below that, “est. 1993”. The guitar heavy theme song plays as the title card “Tracking the Sound: Analog Legends of the 20th Century with Reed Danner” appears.

The intro is short, and the camera returns to Reed walking through the sparse lobby which clearly hadn’t been updated since 1993. In a reverently hushed tone, Reed starts, “For me, personally, this is where my band, Violet Crown, recorded our breakout album, ‘Sleep/Signal.’ So, it holds very special memories. But not just for myself but many artists count this place as hallowed ground.  The Hollow Step recorded their post-grunge masterpiece, ‘Suture,’ here, Sister Machine’s ‘King Electric,’ Rosetta Hale’s ‘After the Floodlights,’ ‘Antenna Sky’ from Luna Receiver, and the list goes on and on.” Reed stopped and looked serious straight into the camera. “This place is special.”

The camera cuts to Reed in a chair in a wood-paneled office. “This place wouldn’t be as special as it is without the man, the myth, the legend, Father Adrian Kline.”

Cut to Adrian wincing through his smile a little bit, “Thank you, Reed. You lot might call me ‘Father,’ but it’s not a term I’ve ever felt comfortable with…”

“The rumor was that you were an ordained minister…”

Adrian let out a little chuckle. “Ah, I do love rumors. I did study theology at Cambridge where I focused on the architecture of cathedrals and sacred spaces—how their acoustics evolved to serve the liturgy. Even without modern amplification, a choir standing at the front of Saint Basil’s could still be heard clearly by the last parishioner at the back. That wasn’t an accident of stone—it was intention. Design.”

The camera holds on Adrian’s face for a strong beat before cutting to a wiry man wearing sunglasses inside the main live room at Low Chapel. “I first worked with Esther Vale here on ‘Echo Parish,’” he stared around reverently. “This place just has such… presence.”

As the man moves around the space, Reed’s voiceover starts, “Five-time grammy winning producer, Lars Devon has spent many hours at Low Chapel Studios.”

Cut to close up interview of Lars Devon: “Esther and I couldn’t find a space that she felt comfortable in until we came to Low Chapel. I met Adrian at a friend’s party and we started talking. He told me about his new studio that he had just opened in the valley. How he used special building techniques and materials to make the place… what was the phrase he used… ‘ethereally and acoustically resonant.’” Lars laughed, but continues, “It sounded like bullshit to me, but the moment we stepped foot in the studio I knew he was on to something.”

Cut to Adrian being interviewed, Reed asks, “The sound on Esther Vale’s albums here has been incredible.”

Adrian smiles warmly and nods.

“On the song ‘Light Underwater,’ there’s a harmony in the pre-chorus…” a snipped of the acoustic track with Vale’s distinct raspy voice rising to the chorus, another voice clearly harmonizes the last phrase, “Because I caaaaaare….” Reed starts again, “Esther swears that’s not her harmony, and Lars’ masters list doesn’t show a harmony track being recorded.”

Adrian lets out a knowing chuckle, “Yes, the ‘mysterious harmony,’” he used air quotes around the words. “I would love to tell you it’s the spirits that inhabit Low Chapel, but I’m afraid the explanation is far more prosaic. In this case it’s just comb filtering where two microphones at slightly different distances will cause phase interference. The human brain interprets that as presence — as though someone’s singing alongside you. Generally it’s not particularly noticeable, but the acoustic panels in vocal booth three – Esther’s preferred booth – act as sort of an amplifier for the effect.”

“So, not ghosts?” Reed asked, a smile clear on his face.

“Oh, I should not spoil the romance. Let people believe what they wish – it’s good for business,” he smiles, but the smile doesn’t quite reach his eyes.

A slow dolly shot down the dimly lit corridor towards the live room, the heavy, padded gray isolation door hangs wide open, the bright natural light pouring in from the end of the corridor. Voice over (Reed): “Every studio has its quirks, but the story every artist tells about Low Chapel starts the same way: ‘They left the door open…’”

Cut to Lars Devon interview: “It happened during the ‘Sleep/Signal’ sessions – your album. We’d finished tracking for the night. The tape was rolling just to catch room tone – Adrian liked to have a few minutes of silence to study how the air behaved after a session. Everyone left for a smoke. When we came back, the reel was still moving. You could hear… movement. Not footsteps, not exactly. More like a chair being pulled across stone.”

He swallows. “Thing is, the floor’s wood.”

Reed sits in the control room listening. On the monitor the sounds of faint scraping, then the soft click of the door latch. The room mics pick up a low hum that swells until it becomes a single, human-sounding breath.

Cut to Adrian: “Ah, yes. The ‘breathing door.’ That was… the barometric seals flexing, I believe. The air pressure equalizing between spaces. A perfectly ordinary acoustic phenomenon.”

He smiles faintly, glances toward the corridor.

“Though it only happens after music has stopped.”

Voice-over (Reed): “That last line stayed with me – ‘…only after music has stopped.’ Because when we wrapped our own interviews for the night, and playback finally went quiet… the latch on that same door clicked again.” The camera slowly closes on the door in question as the tape plays behind, the “click” amplified with reverb.

Cut to the interior of the control room as Adrian sits at the enormous console, adjusting sliders as he and Lars exchange words not audible. Voice-Over (Reed): “Of all the stories surrounding Low Chapel, one still gives engineers goosebumps – the so-called ‘lost take.’”

Cut to a Latino woman, mid-forties, sitting in a studio chair, the title beneath her identifies her as “Carman Reyes, former assistant engineer at Low Chapel Studios”. “It was final night of ‘Signal/Sound.’ We’d been looping playback for hours, trying to nail a cross-fade. Then, around two a.m., the mix started playing something else. Not the take on the reel – something between takes. Same key, same tempo, but the phrasing was… different. Reed’s voice sounded older. Slower.”

Insert archival audio: faint, degraded tape hiss; then a familiar song, just slightly warped. A harmony emerges – subtle, wordless, almost sighing.

Carmen (continuing): “We stopped the machine. Adrian rewound, but the section wasn’t there anymore. Just blank tape. He told us analog does that sometimes – ghost signals, print-through, magnetics misbehaving.” She shakes her head. “But it wasn’t noise. It was music. And whoever was singing that harmony – they were breathing in time with the rest of us.”

Cut to Adrian in interview: “Magnetic tape has a memory, Mr. Danner. It’s sensitive. It remembers hands, air, emotion. That’s why I still use it. It captures more than the signal.”

A small smile. “Sometimes it plays it back.”

. . .

The television clicks off and Adrian sets the remote control down on his desk.

“Why did you turn it off, dear?”

Adrian turned towards the voice, a woman in her thirties sat on the couch across the office, legs crossed, the paisley pattern on the cushion clearly visible through her translucent body.

“They hear ghosts. I hear gratitude,” he said, almost to himself.

The woman smiled. “You shouldn’t have built it so well.”

“Oh, I disagree,” he said. “Without it, they’d still be wandering. At least here, they have something to sing through.”